<i>Elipses …</i> Sees “The End”

Elipses … Sees “The End”

Sep 21, 2009 Daily Writing, Short Stories

It was a banner morning in the Collins basement.

“Elipses …” is together, and through second draft. I really works for me, though I feel that the last two or three paragraphs need to be crafted a bit more. Yesterday I was also thinking the title might need to be reworked again, but this morning I see it carrying the freight quite well, thank you very much.

So cancel the order for Title 3.0.

I’ll run through it again for a little tightening and a rear-end alignment (yikes, that sounds like it could hurt), then it will take a trip through the US Postal service.

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Ron Collins's work has appeared in Asimov's, Analog, Nature, and several other magazines and anthologies. His writing has received a Writers of the Future prize and a CompuServe HOMer Award. He holds a degree in Mechanical Engineering, and has worked developing avionics systems, electronics, and information technology.