It was a banner morning in the Collins basement.
“Elipses …” is together, and through second draft. I really works for me, though I feel that the last two or three paragraphs need to be crafted a bit more. Yesterday I was also thinking the title might need to be reworked again, but this morning I see it carrying the freight quite well, thank you very much.
So cancel the order for Title 3.0.
I’ll run through it again for a little tightening and a rear-end alignment (yikes, that sounds like it could hurt), then it will take a trip through the US Postal service.